The novel "Superior Servant" is written very well.

by zsh323 on 2008-09-08 15:15:36

This novel is not yet finished, and I am eagerly waiting for the update every day. What? Although Miss Second's voice was low, Lin Wanrong, Miss Xiao and Mrs. Xiao heard it clearly.

Not only did Miss Xiao and Mrs. Xiao freeze in disbelief, even Lin Wanrong himself couldn't believe his ears. Was this girl crazy? He understood Xiao Yushuang's intentions; she was trying to clear Lin Wanrong's name. But did she have to sacrifice her own reputation?

Lin Wanrong sighed deeply, "Alright, alright. Xiao Yushuang's efforts are all aimed at helping the Xiao family out of trouble. For her sincerity, I will help them."

Seeing the disbelieving expressions on Miss Xiao and Mrs. Xiao's faces, Lin Wanrong became completely calm inside. He said to Xiao Yushuang, "I know you were deliberately saying these words to save me, but a woman's chastity is as important as her life. You must not speak recklessly."

"Yes, Yushuang, you cannot make things up. You're still young and haven't reached the age to choose a husband yet, so where..."

The ending of "The Best House Steward"

The earlier chapters were very interesting, but later on, there were too many women, and they kept increasing, making it less enjoyable to read. Gradually, I stopped following it. All the women are portrayed as idiots who go into a frenzy when they see the main character, and all the men are fools who get trampled by the protagonist in an unimaginative way.

Learn from others who wrote about going back to the Ming Dynasty to become a prince. Wrap up the story quickly and start a new book, otherwise, a good book will turn into garbage.

Also, the author's portrayal of the ambiguous relationship with Mrs. Xiao feels a bit excessive. Imagine if your sister or brother-in-law had such an ambiguous relationship with your mother, how would you feel?

Let me say one more thing: If you want to criticize, think carefully first whether it makes sense. It's fun to fantasize, but it should be done in moderation. If you keep indulging in fantasies like this, you will definitely get tired of it.